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Primeiramente, parabéns pela incrível técnica demonstrada nesta arte, o resultado é realmente fabuloso! Você conseguiu trazer para uma arte digital uma expressão bem humana para o rosto deste personagem, a assimetria, uma sensualidade no olhar, quebrando o que tanto me incomoda em algumas artes que vejo por ai.
Pontos extremamente positivos ao meu gosto, são os contrastes em neon, me chama muita atenção. O cabelo está detalhado, entretanto, nada exacerbado, seguindo o estilo gráfico do desenho, está perfeito!
Pontos negativos, ao meu ver existem apenas dois, e que são de questão "de gosto": faltou um pouco mais de atenção na finalização do braço que está em amostra, e na armadura do seio esquerdo da personagem, em alguns momentos parece não acompanhar o contorno da torção da parte superior do corpo, detalhes triviais perto do imenso talento expresso na sua obra!
Mais uma vez, parabéns, estou encantado pela sua técnica!
This is what I read from the picture: a tough heroine with a bit of an attitude, beautiful, lithe and deadly.
The colour of this picture is a very dark one, so you placed the smoky bluish light all around on the back of the character. It helps the figure stand out, but it is a little un-natural. Perhaps the lights should be more focused on the back of her upper body, and have a little darker lights around the lower legs like dust or ground fog?
The anatomy is very good, except the collarbone area, which is way too smooth - like a barbie doll. The details around her stomach, fingers and her forearm is excellent. The hair needs a little more work, but I like how it's moving.
The details on the armour is very cool with great designs and execution.
I gave 3 for originality just because I have seen too many pictures of tough cheeks wearing leather standing square on, but that's probably no fault of yours but the overall stereotypical fantasy genre.
It's a pretty good digital piece. My favourite part of it is the eerie background - you caught the gloomy atmosphere well. The skin is also fine, proportions are correct - good job, really. I'm not a fan of so exposed tummies (actually, if she's a warrior, it can only help her get hurt in a fight and considering how fragile the inestines are, some protective wear is more than recommended ), but it's up to your vision. The thing that puts me off a bit is the size of her ears, but well, it's just your concept of a drow - nothing to discuss, each artist has his own vision of a certain character and we can only say what we enjoy more or less. Definitely enjoyable piece - good luck with future ones!
Pontos extremamente positivos ao meu gosto, são os contrastes em neon, me chama muita atenção. O cabelo está detalhado, entretanto, nada exacerbado, seguindo o estilo gráfico do desenho, está perfeito!
Pontos negativos, ao meu ver existem apenas dois, e que são de questão "de gosto": faltou um pouco mais de atenção na finalização do braço que está em amostra, e na armadura do seio esquerdo da personagem, em alguns momentos parece não acompanhar o contorno da torção da parte superior do corpo, detalhes triviais perto do imenso talento expresso na sua obra!
Mais uma vez, parabéns, estou encantado pela sua técnica!
The colour of this picture is a very dark one, so you placed the smoky bluish light all around on the back of the character. It helps the figure stand out, but it is a little un-natural. Perhaps the lights should be more focused on the back of her upper body, and have a little darker lights around the lower legs like dust or ground fog?
The anatomy is very good, except the collarbone area, which is way too smooth - like a barbie doll. The details around her stomach, fingers and her forearm is excellent. The hair needs a little more work, but I like how it's moving.
The details on the armour is very cool with great designs and execution.
I gave 3 for originality just because I have seen too many pictures of tough cheeks wearing leather standing square on, but that's probably no fault of yours but the overall stereotypical fantasy genre.
Overall, a great painting, and very well done.
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